hiç mi yorum yok bilgili kişilerden?

Doruk ben ilk vizeden red almıştım. Bu hafta içinde tekrar başvuracam.. Bankaya 30 bin cad yatıracam ve varsayalım bu sefer mali kısımdan sıkıntı yapmazlar.. Asıl mesele niyet mektubunda.. Geçen sene mezun oldum ve hemen askere gittim.. askerden geleli 9 ay oldu.. bir yerde çalışmadım da ama babamın çalıştıgı firmada çalışmak isterim diye belirttim.. Ben buraya yazmış olduğum niyet mektubunu atsam 2. vize görüşmem için yorumlar mısınız?

Dear Canadian Consulate

Hi, I am Murat Arpacik. I would like to apply canadian study permit after my studies in Turkey. I have studied Biology and graduated from University of Gaziantep in 2010 in Turkey. I would like to go to Canada for 2 years in order to get an education for my future plans.

I have applied to xxx in Vancouver because the goal of this college is to prepare all students for business life and its quality of education. Therefore this is the important part of my life that i can reach my goals as there is a big challenge on our world business so i would like to study international trade because its importance has been increasing in our current global world day by day.

xxx is just one of the company that has international affairs for export and trade. However in order to be in position of the company that my father works, i need to get this specific education where i can have fundamentals and needed education for international trade after my FITT diploma program. I want to work in that company in Turkey. Moreover, i need to expand my vision, improve my english as much as possible while i am there. Besides its cosmopolitan, safe and peaceful country, it is also economical to study in Canada compare to others. Having no intentions to extend my stay in Canada due to my career plans and strong connections to my lovely family and Istanbul as well. I will return to Turkey. I had foreign experience in USA and Romania before and also studied in University of Bucharest whereby student exchange program.

My father has been working in xxx for so many years as a production manager and he will sponsor my costs for studying and living abroad. All necessary documents concerning my sponsor's financial strength has been enclosed herewith my application package. I would welcome any clarification inquiries from your side concerning the financial strength of my visa application anytime.

I kindly ask you to issue me a student visa to enable me to start my studies in Canada.

Best Regards

Bu arada ilk vize için danışmanımın yazmış olduğu mektup budur:
Kesinlikle kendisini yargılamak için değil sadece sizin gözünüzde yapmış olduğum değişimin etkili olup olamayacağını bilmek istiyorum.. Hepsi bu..

Dear Canadian Consulate,

Hi Iam Murat Arpacik,Iwould like to apply canadian study permit after my studies in Turkey,I already graduated from university here in Turkey,however in order to be in position in my father company I need to get this specific education where I can have fundementals and needed education for international trade after my diploma program,I will be working in Turkey,

Therefore this is the important part of my life that I can reach my goals,as for our world business situation,having advanced level of communication english is also important,Thanks in advance for giving this oppurtunity

I had also foreign experience in USA and Romania and I studied also exchange student in University of Bucharest,you can see all my documents in the file my father is fully supporting my education time in Canada,his financial documents in the visa folder as well.

Best Regards

doruk ben şöyle bir düzenleme yaptım fakat okul tarihlerini belirtmeden yaptım. çünkü tam tarihleri bilmiyorum..

Dear Canadian Consulate

Hi, I am Murat Arpacik. I would like to apply canadian study permit after my studies in Turkey. I have studied Biology and graduated from University of Gaziantep in 2010 in Turkey. After my education period, i have done my military service. I would like to go to Canada for 2 years in order to get an education for my future plans.

I have applied to xxx in Vancouver because the purpose of this college is to prepare all students for business life and its quality of education. Therefore this is the important part of my life that i can reach my goals as there is a big challenge on our world business so i would like to study international trade because i think that its importance has been increasing in our current global world day by day.

xxx is just one of the company that has international affairs for export and trade. However in order to be in position of the company that my father works, i need to get this specific education where i can have fundamentals and needed education for international trade after my FITT diploma program. I want to work in that company in Turkey. Moreover, i need to expand my vision, improve my english as much as possible while i am there. Besides its cosmopolitan, safe and peaceful country, it is also economical to study in Canada compare to others. Having no intentions to extend my stay in Canada due to my career plans and strong connections to my lovely family and Istanbul as well. I will return to Turkey. I had foreign experience in USA and Romania before and also studied in University of Bucharest whereby student exchange program.

My father has been working in xxx for so many years as a production manager and he will sponsor my costs for studying and living abroad. All necessary documents concerning my sponsor's financial strength has been enclosed herewith my application package. I would welcome any clarification inquiries from your side concerning the financial strength of my visa application anytime.

I kindly ask you to issue me a student visa to enable me to start my studies in Canada.

Best Regards

abi ancak bu kadar yapabildik.. 16 bin cad okulun ücreti zaten ödendi.. bankada ise tam 55 bin tl bugun babamın hesabına eft ile geçti.. yani 16 bin cad plus 55 bin tl plus 10090 tl aylık maaş gösteren son 3 aylık maaş bordrosu.. inan elimizden gelen bu :)))

cuma günü şubeden gidip konsolosluğa hitaben yazıyı alacam.. içinde bakiye bilgisini gösteren kağıt.. bakalım inşallah bu sefer olur..

Rica ederim her zaman.. Tamamdir, diger evraklarda da herhangi bir eksiklik yada absurdluk yoksa bu sekilde basvurabilirsin diye dusunuyorum. Hadi hayirli haberlerini bekliyorum.

evraklarda bir eksiklik yok bence.. red verildiğinde bankada birikim ve geri dönüşe tatmin olamama gerekçeleri vardı.. birikim konusunda 30 bin cad koyduk umarım onu sorun etmezler ve asıl problemim olan niyet mektubumu da sen yorumladın zaten..

ücret konusunda ise şöyle: önce ödeme yapılıyor ve sonra kayıt yapılıyor ve gelen kabul belgelerinde ödenen tutar vs. açıkça belirtiliyor.. ayrıca programın 104 haftadan oluştuğu ve tüm içeriği de belirtiliyor.. Umarım bu sefer alırım vizeyi..

90 gün içinde idae yapılıyor.. elimizde dekontumuz mevcut.. bir sıkıntı olabiliceğini sanmıyorum.. ciddi bir eğitim kurumu.. umarım vizemi alırım da bir sıkıntı olmaz..

Arkadaşalar banada niyet mektubu hakkında yardımcı olabilir misniz acil lazım ? bir örnegini gönderebilir misiniz ? acil yardımlarınızı bekliyorum ? mail adresim : ozkan_kRcl@hotmail.com